This is the first of a kind of 'transitional' period in my poems (maybe a fancy way of saying that for a few poems around here I'm not quite sure whether I wrote them in the first or second year of uni!). Seriously though, around this time I feel what I was writing was starting to mature somewhat...there was less pure unqualified melancholy, and more worthwhile reflection. I was beginning to get more out of the writing experience.
A fairly short and transparent poem, about overcoming life's obstacles. I took the liberty of throwing in a tiny snippet of family history too.
EVEREST
And sometimes it’s a
mountain
To be conquered, to be
climbed
In a race against
time.
There is danger
everywhere
Hunger never far away
No choice but to carry
on, and on you go
Fighting through that
frost and snow.
In ’77 my father stood with a friend
On a frozen lake at the foot of the Khumbu
icefall
Gazing in wonder, their tent unfurled
At the terrible slopes of the Roof of the
World.
But I can’t see this
roof
Though I feel it
weighing down
As I struggle on
blindly so far from the top
With a cold, lonely
death if I once dare to stop.
I’ve been here far too
long, I cannot know
How much longer I’m
allowed to stay
And I can’t tell if up
there someone’s counting
The footprints that
I’ve made upon my mountain.
Thanks to: Miriam Stockley for Perfect Day, Seth Lakeman for The Charmer, and Foreigner for I Want To Know What Love Is.

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